Angel of Death

Edited!!!

Yay a review! Thanks for commenting and this doesn't necessarily have to do with the Middle East its just at the moment, we're they're located. I have a pretty good ...

Thanks for critiquing!! I am actually in the editing stage. So the reason why this hasn't been continued is because chapter one is going under major construction. It might take ...

Oh Wow!! Thank you so much for the advice and the compliments. It really made my day!! Yeah, some of the things that are said don't seem 18th century-ish but ...

Wow-o-wow! I love how this started and how it ended. Usually I don't like short poems but this was great. You made this seem so surreal but then it ended ...

Thanks so much 200397. Yeah I was really inpired when I seen this picture. The message is really important and when you need to quote me, go ahead. Thanks again ...

Wow! I never would've thought anybody would actually like this-it was just something I thought up for Cal's contest. I do think that this ended abruptly, so I'll work on ...

Hey Kylan!! I read half of this and what you have so far is great. I'll be back to give you a full critique later, I promise but I gotta ...

tnme22: I am so sorry for the confusions. This was written on a whim because the contest that I entered...well I thought that the deadline was today. It was a ...

Hello, I liked this installment! Your character, Aaron, is hard not to love because of his way with words and emotions. Really, I don't understand why Hera would want to ...

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Thanks a bunch Clog:wink:

I've had a lot of help and I really appreciate it. I just edited part one of chapter one today and I was hoping someone else can critique just in ...

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*cries* Kylan this is a great improvement! Your descriptions and the feel of the whole story is just truly magnificent. What I like about your writing is that you don't ...